Please let me know what you think of the first chapter of my novel!!!!!!!!!?

its really good! you're doing well with a lot of details. keep writing. however this part kind of confused me: "Everything he played was steeped in pion, and molded through his personal experiences. Fernando sat in awe as he watched his grandfather play. Fernando played a few squeaky and disorderly notes. Papi laughed, and turned the harmonica around. “You’ve got it backwards son.” “I knew that Papi. I was testing you.” The two sat for hours exchanging their company with one another. It was not too long before they would be in a new land. Lorenzo stared out of his papi’s dusty barred window, and watched brown faces pour in and out of tall white buildings, and down the hot pavement. He closed his eyes and continued to play his harmonica." thats only because it kind of switches from Fernando to Lorenzo, and is Papi the grandfather or father.... my brain just screamed "wtf?" at that part.....